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June 7, 2008 at 12:30:54

Headlined on 6/7/08:
That Damn Critical Eye

by Rady Ananda     Page 1 of 2 page(s)

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Editing has its occupational hazards.  Because it trains the eye to find every mistake on the written page, there comes a point when editors just can't turn it off. While working on a huge piece, that I'd already gone over a few times, on the next pass I discovered I had edited a quote, rephrasing it for better readability. 

   

(Okay, maybe only editors will snicker at that one.)

A few years ago my brother turned me on to Snopes, which debunks urban myths.  This is especially useful for those email forwards that we all get, which usually tell some fantastic story.  Fantastic and untrue.  When I cited Snopes to debunk some recent emails forwarded within my family (one ascribing xenophobic comments to Australian former Prime Minister John Howard, but actually written by a home-grown racist), the family closed ranks in support of urban mythology.   

(Not to defend John Howard – who is now facing war crimes charges in the International Criminal Court – he did make some of the comments in that viral email.)   

But admittedly, pointing out factual reality when a storyteller is at work can feel a bit like raining on a parade.  I appreciate fine storytelling, and am ever amazed at human capacity for drama and exaggeration.  I just come from a place where I established a web reputation for factual accuracy, in a culture that predominantly gets its "news" from the corporate propaganda machine.     

The best I can do with this critical eye, then, is focus it on the more humorous results when editors are ignored.  Here's one that caught my eye today:

Westlake High School misspells 'education' on diplomas (June 5, 2008) Ohio Principal Timothy Freeman says he sent the diplomas back once to correct another error. When the corrected diplomas came back, no one bothered to check the things they thought were right the first time.  [Editorial rewrite: ... says he returned the diplomas once to correct ... and change things to items]   

While entire volumes have been published on the issue of misprints, typing errors, and malapropisms, Jay Leno takes funny headlines to an art. Carnegie Mellon University provides 14 pages of some of the best from The Tonight Show. I must reproduce some here, along with some from my own collection.   

I'll start with a comment on stupid xenophobia:

  

Speaking of illiteracy:

  

 

I've been taking a lot of knuckle dragger heat for confronting sexism in our ranks. Margaret Basset recently posted this quicklink to a video report on sexism in the media, but this headline should be added, just for the sake of levity (notice her surname):

 

I've also been reporting lately on the wonderful headway the LGBT community is making. Imagine my surprise when Jay Leno disclosed how many transgendered folks populate California's Senate:

 

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I'm a Librarian-Media Teacher @ Colton (CA) High School who worked as a music teacher/librarian-media specialist for the U.S. Dept. of Defense Dependent Schools in Canada & Japan for 31 years. Following retirement in 2001, I built a modest career as a freelance writer. Previously I'd been a pt. time broadcast journalist in Tokyo @ TV-Asahi, NHK-TV & NTV. I wrote restaurant reviews for the Yokosuka (Japan) Seahawk weekly newspaper; music reviews/political pieces for a now defunct e-zine. In m...

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L. RETZACKI'm a Librarian-Media Teacher @ Colton (CA) High School who worked as a music teacher/librarian-media specialist for the U.S. Dept. of Defense Dependent Schools in Canada & Japan for 31 years. Following retirement in 2001, I built a modest career as a freelance writer. Previously I'd been a pt. time broadcast journalist in Tokyo @ TV-Asahi, NHK-TV & NTV. I wrote restaurant reviews for the Yokosuka (Japan) Seahawk weekly newspaper; music reviews/political pieces for a now defunct e-zine. In m...

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Rady, since moving into a single rm during a messy/expensive divorce, I've not seen Leno in sometime, but I really enjoyed your examples, especially the $5 peasant & Bush's heart position.  Actually, my finances are such that I wouldn't mind having a $5 peasant occasionally.  Like a dope,it took me awhile to appreciate the illiterate billbd.  Keep up the good work. 

by L. RETZACK (0 articles, 0 quicklinks, 0 diaries, 41 comments) on Saturday, June 7, 2008 at 9:16:44 PM
 


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I broke a rule

One of my English teachers would have used to your comment to chastise my presentation.  I can hear her right now, even tho that was 30 years ago:

Explain yourself. Don't assume people know what you're talking about.

So, lemme apologize for not explaining all of these.  If you check out that Carnegie Mellon web link (posted above), you'll notice that nearly every one of the captured images comes with an explanation.  (And good thing, too, since some of those I didn't get without the explanation)

Good luck on your new life, L.  I lived in a 14x12 ft room for three years, and the only ill effect (probably a huge one) is that I now spend most of my time absolutely alone... on a quiet patio, speaking to no one, listening to no TV or radio... just reading and writing.

thanks for your comment.  writing this was good for a few yuks

by Rady Ananda (97 articles, 247 quicklinks, 19 diaries, 705 comments) on Saturday, June 7, 2008 at 9:46:05 PM
 

 

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