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Dedicated to Donovan

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I started writing this poem
It began with a clear thought
Like water
Then a word came floating


Like a bird to a branch and sang
Then there was someone calling
So I thought I would go out and see
Who was calling Juanita!


But I did not honor that thought
I stayed in the same place
And made a sound with my shoe
By rubbing my sole against the floor


I rested my head on the heel of my palm
And looked out the window beyond the garden
I saw a little mountain in the distance
Which disappeared and I thought


All we have in the garden now is delicata
But how good they are so sweet
So I asked the snail to lock the gate
The snail said, When have I not locked the gate?

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This poem inspired by Donovan's song "First there is a mountain" is a simple celebration of and evocation of Donovan's spacey, trippy lyricism that left so much to the imagination.

Excerpted lyrics of "First there is a mountain:

Oh Juanita, oh Juanita, oh Juanita, I call your name
Oh, the snow will be a blinding sight to see as it lies on yonder hillside

The lock upon my garden gate's a snail, that's what it is
The lock upon my garden gate's a snail, that's what it is
Caterpillar sheds his skin to find a butterfly within
Caterpillar sheds his skin to find a butterfly within

First there is a mountain, then there is no mountain, then there is
First there is a mountain, then there is no mountain, then there is
First there is a mountain, then there is no mountain, then there is
First there is a mountain, then there is no mountain, then there is
First there is a mountain

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Gary Lindorff is a poet, writer, blogger and author of five nonfiction books, three collections of poetry, "Children to the Mountain", "The Last recurrent Dream" (Two Plum Press), "Conversations with Poetry (coauthored with Tom Cowan), and (more...)
 

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