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May 16, 2008 at 13:27:27

Headlined on 5/16/08:
A Poem To Feel The War

by Bruce Allen Morris     Page 1 of 1 page(s)

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Today, with the Iraq occupation fading from our daily news and political discourse, and when discussed mainly in detached, strategic or polical terms, I thought I would offer a poem about the violence, from someone who has never been in war.  I wrote this in February 2003, anticipating the horror of what everyone then thought would be a long, gruesome siege and urban battle in Baghdad.  Of course it has now turned out to be just such a horror there and in Fallujah, Mosul, Ramadi, even if it occurs in slow-motion and out of our sight. With the specter of United States troops remaining for an indefinite period, and who knows how much more brutal urban fighting and civilian "collateral damage" will occur, this poem suddenly has a new immediacy.

Fair notice: it is a very sad and graphic (not violent) war poem, but we must grapple with the pain we are causing as a nation. Because our government has censored the reality of this war from us, we must rely on our own imaginations, centered in our loving hearts, to feel the pain we are causing. If we cannot face that pain, even in print, we can never generate the empathy needed to put an immediate stop to this and all future wars. The conclusion, consistent with all real theology, offers hope. (I changed the last work in the title from "siege" to "surge")

LETTER FROM A FAMILY UNDER SURGE

Only one of them died, Mr. Bush, the night our recovering little enclave
Exploded again under your newest killing scheme.
A jagged chunk of concrete crashed through our window
And cracked her little skull.
But she stayed conscious a long time
Shrieking and wailing from the splitting pain of mortal injury
But even more from the dizzying disbelief and soul-wounding
Knowledge that a grown-up did this to her on purpose
She looked at me with pleading, prayerful, black Arab eyes
Wanting desperately for me to make this all better
Like I had always done before
But somehow knowing I could not
I felt I was betraying my own baby as she bled out on my bosom

Do you know the pain, Mr Bush of watching your child die
And being powerless to stop it?
Do you know the unholy torment of the look in your others children’s eyes
As they realize their own mother cannot protect them?

My second little girl lived two more weeks
She had a cold, just a little cold
Before the lights went out, the water stopped
The sewage and garbage began to pile up, the bodies to rot
All the medicine ran out
The doctors could not move, nor could we.
You did not count on our resolve to fight you in the streets
You thought we would accept your purge
Your conquer and plunder of our ancestral lands
You are both foolish and arrogant to believe that only you know the truth
That only smart bombs and titanium armor breed courage
She got a cough, then a fever, then the fluid began to take her
She gasped for days, determined to outlive this horror
But the bubbling hot, fire-stoked, thick mud in her lungs was too much
Two dollars worth of penicillin would have saved her

Just after her last breath, my oldest son, a sweet, smart 16-year old,
Burst out the door in a terrifying bloodlusted rage
Wholly lost in hatred and vengeance he flung himself wildly at your guns
Futilely and insanely
AND WITH MORE COURAGE AND
PURE BEAUTY THAN I HAD EVER SEEN
He hurled rocks and broken glass against your bullets
For a flashing instant I was so proud of him
But then I realized he too was about to die in front of me
Shredded by a close-quarters, urbanized-warfare, anti-personnel unit,
By which you mean a slaughtering machine

My oldest daughter, barely Fourteen, I swear, Mr. Bush, she just died of grief
She simply could not live in a world where
Human beings actually do this to each other
She wanted to be a mother one day
To labor to create and nurture life herself
She had no place in a world of men who could destroy it so causally

I watched my second oldest boy, a proud, but half-starved Twelve-year old
Say a Prayer for my soul just before I closed my eyes for the last time
Can you imagine the pain, Mr. Bush, of watching your young child
Watch you die?
With my last conscious act I prayed that he would live through this
That one day he would come to your country
Show up on your door step

And looking you right in the eyes
Drop to his knees to wash your feet
So I can know that for at least one moment in your life
You were able to experience

The true heart of God

And to learn
What all the Christs of all the ages have meant
By the word Love.

You see, true divinity appears mad in world of pride and vengeance. Washing the feet of the man who ordered the killing of your entire family? Who would do such a thing? The answer most relevant to Twenty-First Century America: Jesus, but not, I am sad to say, the Jesus touted by our imperial, violent Christian right.

The mother's final prayer for true love looks like weakness in the US American world where might and vengeance rule; looks like pure fiction from a Muslim, whom we are popularly taught understand only force and violence. This is precisely the problem. Until we can imagine a world in which hatred is met with love, until we are able to meet hatred with love, we will never live in peace and love ourselves. That's what I mean when I say that divinity and true love are highly radical, even dangerous today.

I cannot claim to have the courage to live true to these teachings always, or even most of the time. I can only do my best. Each of us can only do our best, but we must at least make the attempt.   For who else is there?

 

http://madnessofdivinity.blogspot.com

Bruce is 46 year-old father of one, stepfather of three and grandfather of two, who left a lucrative law practice at a large national law firm to work, advocate and write for social justice and equality and find a way to incorporate a spiritual life into the material world. He now struggles along to make a decent living while holding true to his deepest principles in Portland Oregon.

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Love is my religion; the world is my family.
carlLove is my religion; the world is my family.

Thank you for your beautiful post

My prayer:  Love (God) forgive us for we know not what we do. 

by carl (1 articles, 0 quicklinks, 2 diaries, 124 comments) on Friday, May 16, 2008 at 4:03:14 PM
 



Wolfie

JESUS, WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON HERE?

Jesus was a man of wealth and luxury. He was able to live a long and

prosperous life until Josephus had him killed.

Saul or Paul or Josephus had no pity on him.

Just get the power and the glory and all else is un-worthy of a soldier

who wants victory.

 

Wolfie has heard the dog whistles and sees the photons change from

wave to particle.

by Wolfie (7 articles, 0 quicklinks, 8 diaries, 938 comments) on Friday, May 16, 2008 at 5:00:03 PM
 



Wolfie

LISTEN AND LEARN

http://www.consciousmedianetwork.com/members/rellis2.htm

by Wolfie (7 articles, 0 quicklinks, 8 diaries, 938 comments) on Saturday, May 17, 2008 at 2:30:20 PM
 



Wolfie

SEE ANOTHER'S VIEW

http://www.consciousmedianetwork.com/members/rellis2.htm

by Wolfie (7 articles, 0 quicklinks, 8 diaries, 938 comments) on Saturday, May 17, 2008 at 2:31:10 PM
 


A retired sales ad marketing trainer, escapee from the automobile business, who reads vorciously and writes whenever possible. The rest of the available time is spent doing woodworking or cooking. Lives in central TX, where the weather is great and politics are dubious. Usually logical and sensible but can be very cranky when assaulted by anybody leaning too far to the right and doesn't know it.
Ivan HentschelA retired sales ad marketing trainer, escapee from the automobile business, who reads vorciously and writes whenever possible. The rest of the available time is spent doing woodworking or cooking. Lives in central TX, where the weather is great and politics are dubious. Usually logical and sensible but can be very cranky when assaulted by anybody leaning too far to the right and doesn't know it.

Well, OK. Maybe

While this poem is heart-rending and the imagery gut-wrenching, it is far from Robert Frostian and will certainly never be read by Dubya, its intended recipient, who wouldn't get it anyway.

No really good poem needs to be immediately explained by its author or be accompanied or introduced by its own exegesis. It should be able to speak for itself and not offer up or attempt to intone it's own praise and piety. And this war is long past any openings for or affectations by simplistic theological musings or allusions to miscellaneous forms of Jesus-isms, right wing, sacchrine or other wise.

 

And yes, we know EXACTLY what we are doing and can't and won't face it because it would be a societal admission of guilt and neglect, moral terpitude and sanguine callousness. We are probably beyond any forgiveness.  

 

And must Wolfie self-aggrandize himself and obtusely comment on goddam everything? Give us all a break and shut up, once in awhile.

 

by Ivan Hentschel (2 articles, 0 quicklinks, 2 diaries, 99 comments) on Friday, May 16, 2008 at 6:38:22 PM
 


A retired sales ad marketing trainer, escapee from the automobile business, who reads vorciously and writes whenever possible. The rest of the available time is spent doing woodworking or cooking. Lives in central TX, where the weather is great and politics are dubious. Usually logical and sensible but can be very cranky when assaulted by anybody leaning too far to the right and doesn't know it.
Ivan HentschelA retired sales ad marketing trainer, escapee from the automobile business, who reads vorciously and writes whenever possible. The rest of the available time is spent doing woodworking or cooking. Lives in central TX, where the weather is great and politics are dubious. Usually logical and sensible but can be very cranky when assaulted by anybody leaning too far to the right and doesn't know it.

Well, you asked

Sorry you took it so hard, Bruce, but whenever I post anything I fully expect to get blasted by someone..and usually do. Sure, we should bother! But if you are going to "bother", then you should remember the old saying about "heat" and the "kitchen". But beyond that, as a literary observation, I was just saying that the poem, as poetry, is not that good, and it is probably in the wrong place. Forget Frost for a moment, and think of Eliot or Shakespeare. Or one of a hundred others. Even better would be to remember Emily Dickinson: in there you have the bleak, the ironic and the cynical, but along with with a major component of incisiveness. Piety and piteousness do not automatically constitute good writing or good poetry, and I never garnered much incisiveness from your piece.  Careful observation, yes. Searing, productive insight? Maybe not. Try submitting it to a poetry journal and see if it gets published. I have my doubts. 

But more to the point: I was not trying to be "hip" or cutely "ironic". Irony just IS, and it is never hip, never in vogue or out. What I find ironic is your posting of this poem in a place which, by your own admission,  is first and foremost political in nature. If you will, write your essay here and send the poetry elsewhere. Perhaps the prose portions of what you wrote was the best, for these purposes.  The poem gets in the way of your politics.

And that which you write in the poem is mostly rather ghastly and foreboding, and I think aimed at a completely different audience. Again, the imagery that gets one's attention overshadows the politics.  Some might say it is even "preachy". As I said, the people who should read it never will, especially here in OEN.  

And as far as cynicism is concerned ( and that old guy, Frost), if were there more vocal and active cynics in the world, we would have less naive buffoonery in politics, love and war. To be a cynic, one must not just dabble his toes in the water of reality, but drink it down in large gulps. And without Frost, and those like him (and dry, ironically), most of the people who read and write here, would never have known about thought about or ventured down "The Road Not Taken". You obviously have.

by Ivan Hentschel (2 articles, 0 quicklinks, 2 diaries, 99 comments) on Sunday, May 18, 2008 at 11:16:11 AM
 


Hater of Nazis above all. Hobbies include activism, military model building, military history, exciting and vital conversation with retired crooks. Retired
John HanksHater of Nazis above all. Hobbies include activism, military model building, military history, exciting and vital conversation with retired crooks. Retired

Pick a war...any war.

The Death of the Ball Turret Gunner From my mother's sleep I fell into the State,
And I hunched in its belly till my wet fur froze.
Six miles from earth, loosed from its dream of life,
I woke to black flak and the nightmare fighters.
When I died they washed me out of the turret with a hose.

by John Hanks (1 articles, 0 quicklinks, 0 diaries, 830 comments) on Friday, May 16, 2008 at 7:02:16 PM
 

 

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